报到 [复制链接]

Laotao:

.                                            轻轻的我来了
                                          正如你轻轻的走
                                        只要你挥一挥衣袖
                                        云儿也不会再回头

斜阳外:

                                         <<另人神往的慰蓝>>
                                             另人思念的家乡

                                                 白云朵朵
                                            带上我们的问候
                                                远方的亲人
                                                 一切安好!

四叔:
夜盼云雾锁金门！yehe.......

.(Laotao)
                                             没有星星
                                             没有月亮
                                           只有那云朵
                                             来迟姗姗

四叔:
报告远大哥：这是司令原创，我偷学的。[表情] [表情]

.
                                   司令的原创比较低调
                                       不与天骄比高
                                       不和云儿争风
                                   真的是轻轻的感觉
                                          

天启:

.                                                  等啊等啊
                                                     等鸡比
                                                 等到口水流
                                                 等到眼西昏
                                                 可怜的小99
                                                      

四叔:
七探金门擒云雾！

.
                                        得来全靠真功夫!

                                        情也真  心也真
                                       不追明星  不慕仙
                                             日探夜等
                                       只为那云雾一片

斜阳外:

                                                   熟悉的老地方
                                                   乘凉的榕树头
                                                      夏日炎炎
                                                    最想念的是
                                                    冰冰的雪条
                                                    

.

五叔公         金钱 +5         D8O？！         6分钟前.

.
                                                    80
                                           醉浪漫的时代
                                           最美丽的年华
                                             似火的热情
                                             如花的绚丽
                                           Do it for you !

d80:

.                                                                                 桥

                                      我不能收获所有的阳光

                                                总有一些
                                                扑向水里

                                                   击起
                                             闪亮的浪花
                                                   照出
                                             美丽的彩虹

                                      (这张牵去"文学艺术"对诗哥的月亮<<桥>>,谢谢d80楼主!)

斜阳外:

                                                       悠然自若
                                                       随风随缘
                                                       点亮自己
                                                       美丽田野

Laotao:

.                                                   司令利害
                                                    抱得云儿
                                                     又牵树
                                                  四叔加油啦!

d80         金钱 +5         好詩！很合親畫面，謝謝。         昨天 09:40



你的照片
就是一首诗
我只想
掀开她的面纱
和她
说说心里的话

.于广中

                                            水上的花
                                            井底的蛙
                                      王子遇到公主啦

.
回 好男孩 的帖子

好男孩:
        远游客远行波士顿  仄平仄仄通平仄仄
        好男孩好步七五湾  仄平平仄仄平仄平
        老师说：盈联的基本要求是起、收和顿脚平仄相对（即上联红字的平仄相对），全部相对才叫“工整”。
        我的 “旁观者旁看三台山（平通仄平通通平平）”，按律联要求是合格的。但按盈联的要求是不合格的。
.......

.远游客远行波士顿
过路人过路七五湾     (想运个吉果吃)

老梧桐,开心吗?小8妹也学识对上下联啦,可惜你和老龙都味水了.

斜阳外

                                                      渡我吧
                                                   超越这红尘
                                                   远离这花香

.